As a writer and curator I visit dozens of artist’s websites every day. I notice that many artists don’t pay enough attention to what and how they write about themselves. This article provides 10 mistakes to avoid when writing your artist’s biography. I wrote it to help you achieve your fullest potential as an artist.
Mistake #1. Sharing too much inappropriate and/or insignificant information
Keep in mind, this is a professional document, not an autobiography. It is interesting to share your cultural, ethnic, life and philosophical influences that have made an impact on your creative direction. Avoid being excessive in this area. The emphasis should be on what you have achieved in your art career and your professional credentials.
Avoid an excess of writing about your personal hardships, apologies, confessions and woes. Decide if your goal is to attract sympathy or appreciation. Write from a positive perspective with an attitude of certainty, passion and confidence.
2. Using excessive art jargon or esoteric language
If you want to appeal to a broad art consumer market consider the level of art knowledge of your visitors. Speak to them in a language that is easily understood. Write in a friendly, approachable and professional manner from a desire to connect with them. You don’t want to alienate them or make they feel that they are uneducated and inferior to you.
3. Highlighting several “vanity” exhibitions and publications
Now that we’re living in The Information Age, art buyers are savvy about the difference between earned and “paid for” art credentials. And, when these items are obvious in your artist’s biography, you’ll lose credibility among art professionals, including legitimate gallery owners, who visit your website.
If you want to see which galleries are classified as “vanity” galleries, read this article.
4. Neglecting important achievements
Take a long look at your resume and select the best achievements to write about in your artist’s biography. This is not the time to be shy or overly modest. Your artist’s biography should bring attention to your hard-earned accomplishments including awards, special commissions, public collections, and praise from art writers.
5. Ignoring typographical, grammatical and other errors
Proofread a dozen times and have a friend who excels in writing or a professional editor also read it before you publish it. If you appear as though you aren’t thorough or don’t pay attention to important details readers might doubt if you ignore other important aspects about your artwork or your professional conduct.
When publishing your biography on your website or in print format, remember to separate the text into several easy to read paragraphs instead of one big chunk of text. And, use a space to separate each paragraph.
6. Writing a weak first paragraph
Truth be told, most of your visitors will scan your written content, and may only read your first paragraph to decide if they want to remain on your website. So, deliver a strong, descriptive, impressive and memorable first paragraph. Needless to say, also apply this rule throughout your entire artist’s biography.
To read examples on how to add magic to your artist’s biography, especially the beginning of it, read this article.
7. Using an inferior quality artist’s photograph
Choose a photograph to accompany your artist’s biography that expresses the distinctive assets of your artistic personality and/or artistic process. Consider a photograph of you in your studio. (See photo of Barbara Rachko below.)
Be creative. If you paint en plein air, use a photograph of you outdoors at the easel. If you are a sculptor or photographer, show yourself in action.
Whatever image you select, make sure it is high quality and cropped properly without any visual distractions.
8. Writing too much or too little
When visitors visit your “About” page they want to gain insight about you as a creative person and your professional achievements. How many significant credentials you’ve acquired will determine the length. On a website, most often 3-4 paragraphs with 3-4 sentences each will suffice, or around 250 words. If you have a CV or resume (your career accomplishments in an organized listing format), provide a link to that page or present it below your artist’s biography on the same page.
Naturally, if you’re writing an artist’s biography for other purposes, such as to accompany a grant application or gallery submission, it should be longer.
Avoid batching together a string of endless and varied ideas in one paragraph. Consider using several different paragraphs as needed so the reader can take a breath, digest what you have written and avoid being confused and disinterested.
9. Failing to Update Your Artist’s Biography
Few things are more depressing than visiting an artist’s website and seeing that they haven’t updated their artist’s biography in a year or more. If visitors read that your best achievements took place in the distant past, you can expect to lose their interest. I urge you to review your artist’s biography seasonally and update it as your career grows.
10. Not Having An Artist’s Biography on Your Website
Potential art buyers expect to view your art portfolio and an “about the artist” page. Those two pages and a “contact” page may be all you need to attract art buyers and sell your art. By the time you have reached this part of the article and have learned all of the other mistakes to avoid, you have substantial information. This article “How to Write Your Artist’s Biography” will give you step-by-step advice on how to write your artist’s biography.
Sue Anne Foster says
You are right up my alley!
MA Art Therapy
phD. Education ( teaching Creativity)
Two works currently I “Activism through the Arts Exhibit” Crocker art museum Sacramento
Best of show “Changing Perspectives” 2020
Savramento Fine Art Center
Worked in long & short term psychiatric facilities
Taught 10 years Sac State. Art professor lecturer
Taught 20 yrs Extension American River College. “Tapping Your Creative Potential”
Teach out of my own studio Repousse and
Shibori. Founding member of the Labyrinth Society.
President: Valley Sculpture Artists
Part of PBS documentary… one of 17 breast cancer survivors who climbed Mt. Aconcagua I. Argentina. Art is a life saver!💙🧡💜💚❤️
Pleased to know your group exists… eager to read more of your articles! Bravo!!!
Renee Phillips says
Thank you Sue Anne for visiting my website and writing your comment. I look forward to many more future visits from you. What an impressive resume you have! I highly recommend you also visit my other website The Healing Power of ART & ARTISTS. I think you will find kindred spirits there and will relate to our mission. The Healing Power of ART & ARTISTS is an initiative of Manhattan Arts International, an organization launched in 1983 to promote emerging artists. The Healing Power of ART & ARTISTS is a growing global community of artists, advocates, and writers “dedicated to raising awareness about how ART serves as a positive catalyst for enhancing the well-being of individuals, society and the environment. We believe that art has the power to heal, inspire, provoke, challenge and offer hope.”
Kay Stratman says
Good article, and helpful, Renee. Thank you. When including select achievements, exhibitions, etc, in one’s bio, should one go way back in time to show long time consistency and “street cred”? And how far back should one list such things on a resume?
Renee Phillips says
Dear Kay,
Thank you for your comment and excellent questions. Unfortunately, there is no definitive answer that applies to everyone. It really depends on your current situation, former achievements, and the purpose for writing the artist’s biography. If you have a long history highlight the most important recent achievements and let visitors know that a more extensive resume spanning x number of years is available with a link or upon request.
I want to emphasize, there is no “one size fits all” rule. The best rule is do whatever works best to show your strengths. I hope this helps.
Best regards,
Renee